IT WAS AWESOME! I liked how the story line went. I specially liked the Ferrari part. next time try to make it longer, because it got cutoff at the end. I did not know that people wold meet together and commit crimes like that.
I really liked the story that you made and how it all went together. But it was missing a few things, such as how long something stays copyrighted after the author's death and so on and so forth. You also forgot to add transitions between each slides but everything else was met. I would suggest for you to add everything to the presentation and to narrate it a bit smoother. But everything else was perfectly fine. Nice job.
I liked the story line and the way you presented the information. I liked how there was a good guy trying to stop the bad guys. The only problem was you didn't have all of the information in it.You mumbled a little bit and that made it hard to understand some parts of it.
I wish you talked slower and louder it sounded like you were mumbling at times. You didn't have all the information needed but overall I loved the story line it was fun and creative.
Your Powtoon was GOOD but there were a few things holding it back from being GREAT. First off, the things on the rubric were lightly but accurately presented but could have had a lot more information on it. Secondly, your topic with the flying bad guy and good guy was awesome actually, which I can't actually complain about. Thirdly, you stut...ter...ed which if I'm not mistaken, the rules required you to have an uninterrupted and clean script and monologue. The biggest thing that was might have made this from GREAT to GOOD was that you were cut-off at the end at the 1:00 mark, did you know you can add time to slides up to 20 seconds? Other than the cut-off and stuttering, this presentation was pretty good with a well thought out story and good information.
I liked your presentation, the only things that could have made it better is talking slower and a little louder. Also you could have followed he rubric closer but it was fun.
Great video! The requirements were met for the teaching and so were the ones for Powtoon. This story was probably the most creative one I have seen yet, it actually has an interesting story with a flying crime fighter! Great narration of the script. The content of the story and information went great together. Overall nice presentation!
IT WAS AWESOME! I liked how the story line went. I specially liked the Ferrari part. next time try to make it longer, because it got cutoff at the end. I did not know that people wold meet together and commit crimes like that.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story that you made and how it all went together. But it was missing a few things, such as how long something stays copyrighted after the author's death and so on and so forth. You also forgot to add transitions between each slides but everything else was met. I would suggest for you to add everything to the presentation and to narrate it a bit smoother. But everything else was perfectly fine. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story line and the way you presented the information. I liked how there was a good guy trying to stop the bad guys. The only problem was you didn't have all of the information in it.You mumbled a little bit and that made it hard to understand some parts of it.
ReplyDeleteI wish you talked slower and louder it sounded like you were mumbling at times. You didn't have all the information needed but overall I loved the story line it was fun and creative.
ReplyDeleteYour Powtoon was GOOD but there were a few things holding it back from being GREAT. First off, the things on the rubric were lightly but accurately presented but could have had a lot more information on it. Secondly, your topic with the flying bad guy and good guy was awesome actually, which I can't actually complain about. Thirdly, you stut...ter...ed which if I'm not mistaken, the rules required you to have an uninterrupted and clean script and monologue. The biggest thing that was might have made this from GREAT to GOOD was that you were cut-off at the end at the 1:00 mark, did you know you can add time to slides up to 20 seconds? Other than the cut-off and stuttering, this presentation was pretty good with a well thought out story and good information.
ReplyDeleteP.S.: Why not John or Alex?
I liked your presentation, the only things that could have made it better is talking slower and a little louder. Also you could have followed he rubric closer but it was fun.
ReplyDeleteGreat video! The requirements were met for the teaching and so were the ones for Powtoon. This story was probably the most creative one I have seen yet, it actually has an interesting story with a flying crime fighter! Great narration of the script. The content of the story and information went great together. Overall nice presentation!
ReplyDelete